I liked the Angry Letter essay because I could see his voice and I feel he worked hard on it.
I liked the picture in the background and I liked to see all of his work he has done this semester. I would like to see him improve on double checking his essays so he has no errors.
I think he is the best at voice because I can feel him talking when reading his essay. It was genuine and only he could have wrote it.
I would like to see Zak improve on word choice because he uses the same words and I would like to see him use a wider vocabulary. Also, sometimes his sentences doesn't make sense.
I liked the Angry Letter essay because I could see his voice and I feel he worked hard on it.
ReplyDeleteI liked the picture in the background and I liked to see all of his work he has done this semester. I would like to see him improve on double checking his essays so he has no errors.
I think he is the best at voice because I can feel him talking when reading his essay. It was genuine and only he could have wrote it.
I would like to see Zak improve on word choice because he uses the same words and I would like to see him use a wider vocabulary. Also, sometimes his sentences doesn't make sense.